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     legal matters and our enriching discussions on the philosophy of free
     software have been invaluable to me. \\
 
-    I am also thankful to Roselyne Chotin for agreeing to fund this work.
-    Without her support, none of this would have been possible, and
+    I am also thankful to Roselyne Chotin for agreeing to fund this work as
+    without her support, none of this would have been possible, and
     Franck Wajsburt for his invaluable advice at the beginning of my work,
     which greatly helped me organize myself, as well as for his support and
     reviews throughout this period. \\
@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@
     I am deeply grateful to Denis Carikli (GNUtoo), my fellow maintainer of
     GNU Boot, for his meticulous reviews, emotional support, and brilliant ideas
     that enriched this work, and to Richard M. Stallman for his advice and
-    support throughout this journey.
+    support throughout this journey. \\
 
     A big thank you to Manuel Bouyer for his infinite patience with all my
     requests regarding network, software, and hardware configurations. \\